The following article has been reproduced (permission pending) from the Primary English Teaching Association News Issue No. 2 June 1996 for the interest of MTeach students. The article is © PETA 1996.
by Anne Hanzl
Index
Introduction
PICTURE BOOK OF THE YEAR
The Story of Rosy Dock
Old Pig
Just Another Ordinary Day
The Hunt
Billy the Punk
The Race
BOOK OF THE YEAR: YOUNGER READERS
The Big Bazoohley
Tashi
45 & 47 Stella Street and Everything That Happened
Swashbuckler
A Bit of a Hitch
I Hate Books!
With the 1996 CBCA Short List now available, teachers from pre-school through to upper
secondary once more have the opportunity to explore some of the best Australian children's
literature published in the last year.
The following pages offer suggestions for exploring each of the shortlisted books
in the two fiction categories most applicable and useful to teachers in primary schools--that
is, the Picture Book of the Year and the Book of the Year: Younger Readers.
Exploring each of the books
- It is anticipated that teachers will read each of the books for themselves before
exploring them with children. Therefore the suggestions presented here are intended
to complement teachers' own planning, and should be adapted to meet each teacher's
particular classroom context.
- While it is ideal if children have the opportunity to read and explore the books
individually (with picture books like The Hunt it is essential), it is also valuable
if they can read, share and discuss them with each other and with the teacher. In
this way they can share their personal responses and insights, and teachers can offer new
ways of considering a story and its illustrations. Children themselves, of course,
often see things in illustrations and the text that their teachers may have missed.
- Children should consider the literary merit of each text. Does it, above all, tell
a good story and tell it well? Is the story fresh and original, and does it involve
the reader in a way appropriate to the type of story and its theme, and its intended
audience?
- Children should also look at the overall design of each book, including the covers
and endpapers--do they add to the overall unity of story and theme? They should consider
whether the text and illustrations in picture books meld together to tell the story, giving it a 'seamless unity'.
- When children have had time for further reflection, exploration and comparison,
they may like to have a poll to decide a rank order of merit for the six books in
each of the two categories. They can then compare their findings with those of the
CBCA judges when the awards are announced in Children's Book Week, 17-23 August.
(in alphabetical order by illustrator)
Jeannie Baker
Random House Australia
Reading/exploring the book, including analysis of illustrations and design
- Study the front cover-- what kinds of things can we see through the window? Where
might we find such a landscape / flora / fauna? In what kind of building do you think
the window belongs? Why do you think the artist has chosen to give readers this view
of a particular landscape?
- Is the name of Jeannie Baker, the author/artist, familiar to you? If so, what kinds
of picture books has she created before, and what expectations do you have of this
book? What kinds of materials does she use to create her illustrations in this and
other books? Who or what do you think 'Rosy Dock' is?
- Look at the front endpapers--does there seem to be any connection between the front
cover and the endpapers? What can we tell about the lifestyle of the lady? Why do
you think she has a fence around her little house? Are there any differences between
the plants inside the fence and those in the rest of the countryside? What kinds of animals
can you see? Which ones do you think would be native to this part of the country?
- When you have finished the book, study the back endpapers and back cover--compare
the scenes with those at the front. What is missing from the landscape? What has
been added?
- How would you describe the landscape on the first double page spread of the book?
Why do you think the artist has made the blue sky so dominant? Does anything grow
or live in this land? Why do you think the river is the colour it is? Does the language
used to describe the setting for the story create images of its own? (e.g. How can
mountains be described as 'worn down bones'? Is there anywhere that really looks
like this?)
- How does the artist create another kind of visual impact on the next double page
spread? How does she ensure that the reader concentrates visually on the figure of
the woman and the plants? Is there anything else of significance in this picture?
- While there is a written text in this book, much of the story and the artist's purpose
in telling it is conveyed through the illustrations. For example, the text states
'Water is precious'--does this make sense when there is a large river running through
the land behind the house? Why is it that some people seem to be sitting 'on' the
river? How/where do the seeds of Rosy Dock spread? What effect does the flooding
river have on the landscape/people/animals/ birds? Is the land in this area ever
entirely without water? Do the changes to the land happen suddenly or gradually? Is it possible
for people to live on this land without causing environmental damage?
- Could the chest that is seen in several of the pages be a metaphor for anything
relevant to the theme of the story? (e.g. Pandora's Box).
Ron Brooks (text Margaret Wild)
Allen & Unwin
Reading/exploring the first part of the book
- How does the artist suggest which of the two pigs on the front cover is 'Old Pig'?
Who do you think the other pig might be?
- The title page and the first three pages 'set the scene' for the story and the relationship
between the two pigs. How would you describe this relationship? Why are Old Pig and
Granddaughter so close?
- Why do you think that Old Pig is so insistent that Granddaughter eat corn and oats?
What does Old Pig's statement 'While I'm alive . . . ' foreshadow to Granddaughter
(and to the reader)?
- Why is Granddaughter so worried when Old Pig does not get up for breakfast? How
does the reader know that Granddaughter is very worried? Why does Granddaughter pretend
to get cross with Old Pig at breakfast the next morning?
After reading the story
- What kinds of things does Old Pig do to prepare for what she knows is coming? (e.g.
practical things--closing her bank account, making sure that Granddaughter has money,
paying bills; spiritual things--'feasting' her eyes on the beauty of nature).
- How does Granddaughter help to make Old Pig's passing easier? (e.g. looking after
Old Pig and hugging her; playing the cello; accompanying Old Pig as she visits her
favourite places; listening to Old Pig; following Old Pig's advice).
- How do you think Granddaughter is feeling at the end of the story? How do you think
she will cope on her own?
- What do you think are the underlying themes of this story? Has the author written
any other story about companionship, preparing for, and coping with, old age and
death? (e.g. The Very Best of Friends). Could this story also be seen as a celebration
of life? Do you think that such stories should be written for children who are at the
beginning of their lives?
- Why do you think the author chose pigs rather than people as the main characters ? Are there any other animals/ birds in the story?
Analysis of the book's illustrations and design
- What extra elements about the relationship between Old Pig and Granddaughter do
the illustrations convey, over and above the text?
- Why do think the artist used pencil and watercolours rather than some other medium?
What is the effect of these soft media?
- When/why do some full double page spreads have one large illustration, and others
up to seven small illustrations? What is the difference in the effect produced?
Rod Clement
Harper Collins
A note to teachers: it would be interesting to read this story to children first without
showing them the front cover or any illustrations. Discuss with the children why
a publisher would agree to publish such an 'ordinary' and rather boring text. Ask
the children to suggest ways of illustrating this text to convince the publisher.
Reading/exploring the book
- Examine the front cover--does the girl look concerned about the large animal sitting
on her lap? What kind of animal is it--a Great Dane? What does the design of the material
covering the armchair remind you of?
- What do you think the girl on the title page is looking at? Is it the same girl
as on the front cover? Has her mood changed? (Keep lookout for this illustration
in the book.)
- The illustration on the first double page spread leaves the reader in no doubt that
Amanda lives in no ordinary world. Does she seem concerned about the rather exotic
'alarm bell' used to wake her up?
- What are the other extraordinary people/creatures/ situations in Amanda's life?
Do all these strange things/ people/animals come from other worlds/times? Is there
anything 'ordinary' about Amanda's life? (e.g. she eats breakfast, goes to school).
Is there anything unusual about the 'ordinary' people in the story, including Amanda?
Study of the author/illustrator and analysis of illustrations
- Rod Clement is the author and the illustrator--what do you think was his intention
in creating this picture book? How does he show that he has a good sense of humour?
(e.g. the incongruity of the very ordinary text interpreted through very extraordinary
illustrations, visual humour, irony). What other stories/times/characters does the
artist evoke in the illustrations?
- How would you describe Clement's style of illustrating? (e.g. surrealistic/exaggerated
with some realistic elements). Why do you think Clement uses a lot of white space
as a background to the illustrations?
- Compare this book with other books by Clement-- Counting on Frank, Edward the Emu.
What similarities and differences are there in the three books?
Narelle Oliver
Lothian Books
This book can be read in two ways --firstly, as a story told with text and illustrations;
secondly as an information book, making full use of the factual information given
at the end about the behaviour of the birds, animals and insects in the pictures
and text in the rest of the book.
The first reading
- Look at the front cover--how would you describe the look/behaviour of the bird? What
do you think it might be looking for, and why? Are there any other creatures in the
illustration?
- What effect do you think the artist is trying to achieve with the design on the
endpapers?
- Read the quotation by Zborowski on the title page--what do you think he is trying
to explain to the reader?
- Can the text at the beginning of the story be described as poetic in its use of
language? Does the language match the illustration? What do you think are the main
concerns of the mother Tawny Frogmouth? How would she behave if anyone/anything approached
the nest?
- As you continue through the story, consider what the mother owl seems to be looking
for, and why. What special skills does she need to achieve this aim? Why does she
miss seeing the Bark Moth? Are there any other creatures that she doesn't see? What
special skills do you need to see these creatures? Why is it that so many of the creatures
seem able to 'disappear'?
- When does the hunter become( the hunted? If you were telling the story, would you
have let the frogmouth catch the moth? What would happen if the frogmouth was not
successful?
Analysis of the book's illustrations and design
- As you read through the book can you find a pattern in the storytelling in text
and illustrations? Why do you think the author/illustrator has told the story in
this way?
- What skills did the author/illustrator use to ensure that the creatures being hunted
are hard for the owl (and the reader) to see? Do you think that she is reflecting
real life in the illustrations, as well as in the story itself? How has she made
sure that we can see each creature being hunted by the owl when the creature is first mentioned?
- What techniques and media do you think the artist has used for the illustrations?
(hand-coloured linocuts). What special effects does this medium/technique achieve
that are well suited to the topic being illustrated?
Second reading
- Read the information on pages 28-31 to find out the names of the camouflaged creatures
in the illustrations. Explore the differences between camouflage, disguise and behaviour.
Are animals in the wild the only ones to use these tactics?
- Why do animals/insects hunt each other in this way? Discuss the concept of the food
chain, and whether all living creatures (including people) are part of that chain.
- Zborowski is an entomologist--what does this mean? How does a person become one?
- Look up an atlas to find out where this story is set; if possible find some pictures
of the countryside that the artist has portrayed in the illustrations. How does the
type of flora and fauna native to a particular part of a country affect all the creatures living there?
Craig Smith
(text Jessica Carroll)
Random House Australia
Exploring the beginning a the book
Before reading the book, teachers and children might seriously consider whether they
should read this book, as the title and front cover look fairly shocking!
- Does the illustration on the title page confirm your concerns about this book? Who
or what do you think is going to be 'whammed'?
- After reading the first page of the story, are you changing your mind about it?
Might the author and illustrator be playing games with the reader? What kind of boy
do you think Billy is? Could he have anything to do with 'Billy the Punk'?
- How would you describe the expression on Billy's face when he first saw the punks?
Why are the words describing the punks in different sizes and types of print? Why
do you think Billy was studying the punks so hard?
After reading the book
- Was your first description of Billy's character accurate? Why do you think he was
so fascinated by the punks and the way they dressed? How would you describe his behaviour,
going to school dressed as a punk? How did you expect his teacher to react? Did the teacher's reactions change as the week went by? Why do you think Billy's parents
didn't react any earlier?
- What do you think Billy's father may have said to Billy when he refused to put on
his school clothes? Why do you think that the father took Billy to see soldiers with
the various uniforms? Did Billy's visit to the army barracks have any effect on him?
- Is this the kind of story you thought it was going to be after looking at the front
cover? Is this a serious story, a funny story, or a funny/serious story? If you think
it's funny, what makes it so--the illustrations, the text, the combination of the
two, the incongruity of a little boy wanting to be a punk, or all of these? What might
be some serious elements in the story?
- Why do you think Billy wanted to dress like the punks he saw? Why do you think punks
dress as they do? Is their dress reflected in their behaviour? Why do some people
get upset with punks? Why do some groups of people like to dress in a similar way?
Are there some situations where it is important for people to dress in a similar way?
Ann Spudvilas
text Christobel Mattingley
Scholastic
Exploring the beginning of the book
- Study the front cover-- what kind of race do you think this story will be about?
How good a runner do you think the boy is?
- Read the first page of story--the boy in the text and illustrations appears to be
very athletic. Have you any ideas as to why he always comes last in races?
After reading the book
- What special qualities did Greg have? Why do you think he smiled at people, no matter
what they said? Was he always happy? Why was he like a 'piece of jigsaw' that didn't
'quite fit'? Why did he watch everyone so closely?
- Was not being able to win a race the only problem that Greg had? How did his disability
affect his school work, and his relationships with others? Were there any other kinds
of 'race' Greg had to win?
- How can we tell what other people are like? Are we always right in our judgments?
Why did one teacher work out what Greg's problem was while the other teacher didn't?
How did the second teacher confirm her suspicions about Greg's disability? Could
anyone else have worked out what the problem was? Did you work it out as the story was being
read? To what extent do you think Greg really understood what was wrong?
- How would you treat Greg if he was in your class? Does having a disability mean
that you can't join in most things at school, and life generally?
Analysis of the illustrations
- Look carefully at what the artist actually illustrates-- what does she concentrate
on? What does she not include? Why do you sometimes only see part of a person, such
as the teacher? Why do you think she includes very little background detail? What
is the effect of so much white space in many of the illustrations?
- The artist has had much experience as a portrait painter --how is this evident in
her illustrations for this story?
(in alphabetical order by author)
Peter Carey
University of Queensland Press
Before reading the book
- Who or what is a 'big bazoohley'? Does the front cover give you any clues?
After reading Chapters 1 and 2
- How would you describe the members of Sam's family and their attitude to life? Is
his father's philosophy 'One door shuts, another opens' a useful
one to live by? How does Sam feel about his father, his mother, the family's lifestyle?
- Have you any ideas how the family might solve its immediate problems?
After completing the novel
- Sam faced several problems after the sleepwalking episode--what were they? (e.g.
locking himself out of his room; coping with Muriel and George's crazy scheme). How
did Sam turn the difficult situation he found himself in with Muriel and George to
his own advantage?
- What kind of adjectives could you use to describe Sam? (e.g. spunky, intelligent,
adventurous). How would you describe Muriel and George? (e.g. greedy, selfish, fanatical,
exploitative). What kind of person was Wilfred, their son? Do people really become obsessed about winning competitions like the 'Perfecto Kiddo Competition'? What sometimes
happens to the children/animals who are entered in these competitions?
- How did Sam feel about the competition, and those involved in it? Should he have
agreed to take Wilfred's place?
- Why did Philip Lopate award the prize to Sam and Nancy? Should he have done so?
- How would you describe Mr. de Vere, his role in the competition, and his role in
the life of Sam's family? Do people like him really exist?
- Devise a short play or readers' theatre session of the episode where the competition
for the 'big Bazoohley' is taking place. Work out how many characters are needed
and who are the main ones. (e.g. Sam and Nancy, the 'nasty' boy and his partner,
Philip Lopate, Muriel and George, Sam's parents). Decide which parts are funny and which
are more serious, and how to build up tension to reach the climax.
- Try to answer the questions posed in the last chapter of the book about what might
happen to Wilfred and his parents in the future. Did anyone already make Wilfred's
life a little happier?
- Do you think Sam and his parents learned anything from their experiences in Toronto?
- Try to create a miniature painting similar to the one described in the last chapter,
including all the scenes/ characters mentioned.
Anna Fienberg (illus. Kim Gamble
Allen & Unwin
Looking at the front cover and title page
- What mood is created by the cover illustration? What kind of person/creature do
you think Tush is? What kind of story do you think this is going to be?
After reading the book
- How would you describe the relationship between Tashi and Jack? Did Jack's parents
really understand who Tashi was, and why he was so important to Jack? What is it
about his Dad's questions that Jack didn't like?
- Discuss the things that are really special about Tashi. Would you like to have a
friend like Tashi? ow did Tashi and Jack find each other?
- Why do you think the swan helped the warlord to return home? Do you know other stories
in which a swan (or swans) play a role? (e.g. folk/fairy tales; the stories of Hans
Christian Andersen). Are there other characters in this book you have met in other
stories? (e.g. dragons). How did the dragon help to cause his own loneliness? Do you
think he really was the last dragon on earth? How was it that Tashi was able to defeat
the dragon when the dragon was so much bigger than him?
- How has the author created a story within a story? What other kinds of stories do
you think Tashi might have to tell? (See the sequel Tashi and the Giants.)
- What mood is created by the soft grey pencil illustrations? What kinds of things
can you see in the illustrations which the text doesn't tell you about?
Elizabeth Honey
Allen and Unwin
Before reading the book
- Look at the front/back covers, title/half-title/contents page -- they are messy,
disorganised and amateurish! What an odd title! Why is there a child's letter on
the back cover? What are the publishers thinking of? Who might have written this
book? What are your expectations of this book?
After reading Chapter 1
- Do you understand better now what type of book this is going to be? Whose story
is Henni telling, and why do think she has chosen to tell it in this way? How does
Henni begin her story? (e.g. by introducing people, describing 47 Stella Street).
How does she make it seem like a true story? Could it be a true story?
After reading the novel
- How did the people who lived in Stella Street normally get on? Why did the new people
in No. 45 become known as the 'Phonies'? Why did the Stella Street community start
reacting negatively to the new neighbours?
- Who/what annoyed the Phonies about their new neighbours? Why did Briquette's behaviour
make them angry? (Was 'Briquette' an apt name for the dog?) Why do dogs often cause
problems between neighbours? What did Briquette's owners do to stop him causing further trouble?
- Discuss what it means to be a good neighbour, and how/ why neighbourhoods change
in various ways over time.
- When and why did the children start becoming really suspicious of the Phonies' behaviour?
Could there have been other explanations for the things that the Phonies said and
did?
- What adjectives could you use to describe Henni and her friends? (e.g. loyal, inventive,
thoughtful, funny, brave, adventurous, foolhardy).
- What do you think life is going to be like in Stella Street from now on? What
kind of career do you think Henni might follow when she grows up? If you would like
Henni to write another story, you could write to her through Elizabeth Honey and
her publisher.
- What genre does this story belong to? (e.g. adventure, first person narrative, journal/diary
writing). Why do you think the author chose this writing style to tell the story?
What devices does the author use to involve the reader in the narrative? (e.g. chatty style of writing, including some asides to the reader, some exaggeration to
make a point, use of capital letters for emphasis, handwritten copies of notices/
letters, sketches, fast, racy style when things are tense, action taking place).
James Moloney
University of Queensland Press
Before reading the book
- What is a 'swashbuckler'? (e.g. a swaggering bully or ruffian). How does the character
portrayed on the front cover show that he's trying to be a 'swashbuckler'? What do
you think the building behind him might be? Is this story set in the present day
or in times past?
- Look at the title page--is the person at the forefront in the small illustration
a 'swashbuckler' too?
After reading Chapters 1 & 2
- Who is telling this story? What kind of problems is he facing? Why do you think
the author chose to write the story from his point of view?
- Is it common for bullies to try to intimidate a new boy at school? What kind of
person do bullies often pick on? (e.g. someone vulnerable).
- How was it that someone like Anton managed to 'beat' the bullies? (e.g. surprise
attack, sophisticated/archaic use of language). What kind of person does Anton seem
to be? Why do you think he behaves and speaks as he does?
After completing the novel
- How did the different members of Peter's family cope with his father's gambling
problem? Why do you think Peter was so angry with, and resentful of, his father?
Had he stopped loving his father? How did Peter come to realise that his own father
needed 'rescuing' too? Why did Peter find Anton's attitude to his dying father so hard to understand?
- Were you right in your early assessment of Anton's behaviour, including his use
of archaic language? What was the biggest real challenge that Anton had to face?
How can an illness like cancer be likened to a dragon? What device did Peter finally
use to get Anton to visit the hospital? What do you think the tower on the front cover of
the book might represent? What 'dragons' do you think Anton's father had to face?
- What do you think the relationship between Peter and Anton might be like in the
future? Do you think they would continue to play 'hero' games?
- Why do you think Anton knew about Dick Turpin, Beowulf, the Scarlet Pimpernel, Scaramouche,
the Count of Monte Christo and Robin Hood? Were they 'swashbucklers' or 'heroes'
(or do people often confuse the two terms)? Why do people seem to enjoy hearing about 'heroes'? Are there any modern heroes?
Mary Steele
Hyland House
This is a collection of eight selfcontained short stories, each of which can be read
and enjoyed for its own sake.
After all stories have been read, it may be useful
to discuss:
- which is the most memorable and/or humorous story for each child and why; the three
most popular stories with the group.
- the author's style of writing, her use of humour, characterisation, related themes
in the different stories (if any)
- where authors get their ideas from--in this book the author has obligingly included
a section at the end (the Afterword) in which she discusses the 'seed' of the idea
for each of the stories. Children could begin their own story 'ideas' book.
- how short story writing differs from novel writing (e.g. short stories often focus
on one episode and/or one or two characters; there is usually not as much 'lead in'
to the story as in novels; greater intensity of writing, tighter plot structure).
Kate Walker
(illus. David Cox)
Omnibus Books
Before reading the book
- The title and picture of the boy on the front cover seem a little depressing--what
kind of story do you think this is going to be?
After reading Chapter 1
- Whose story is this? Why do you think the author has Hamish telling his own story?
- What does Hamish like about books at this stage in his life?
Grandpa likes books too, but what is rather unusual about the way he reads them?
Why do you think he does this? What do Hamish and Nathan like about Grandpa's reading?
How does Hamish feel about himself and his abilities before he goes to school?
After completing the book
- What did Hamish enjoy about school for the first two or three years? Do you think
that Hamish thought he could actually read at this stage?
- What is reading, and what do you need to understand about it before you can begin
to learn to read? Did Hamish realise he had a problem? Why didn't his first teachers
and his parents realise that Hamish had a reading problem?
- What was Hamish very good at? (e.g. telling stories with lots of expression, using
his vivid imagination, using his memory). Was this why it took so long for adults
to realise that Hamish wasn't actually reading the words on the page?
- What device did Hamish's parents use to show that reading is important and useful?
Even though Hamish accepted this, why was he still depressed at school, and when
he and Angie tried to teach themselves?
- What was the crisis point for Hamish and Nathan? How did Nathan manage to convince
Hamish that he wasn't stupid? How do you think Hamish is feeling by the end of the
story? What kinds of things do you think that Hamish might do when he grows up?
- What element in the writing style/illustrations story of a serious issue light and
easy to read?
- Discuss the reasons why it is important for people in our society to be able to
read. Now that we have computers, does this mean that people needn't learn to read?
Are you ever too old to learn to read?
- Design/illustrate a picture for the back cover of the book as a contrast to the
front cover.
The entire Short List is available from your State Branch of the Children's Book Council
of Australia, or check with your teacher/librarian, who may already have a copy.
Anne Hanzlis a senior lecturer in the Dept of Professional and Further Education at
the Coburg campus of the Royal Melbourne Institute of Technology. Widely known and
respected for her work on children's literature, she has recently compiled with colleague Margot Hillel the book Celebrate!: The Colour and Splendour of Australian Children's
Literature over Half a Century (1996, Viking, Ringwood, Vic).
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